Oh dear life really what you are?
Nothing tangible or touchable,
You never make-up your mind,
One way or the other,
You may say there is only one way,
But never reveals what awaits me,
Everytime I feel confident of my footstep,
You through a new challenge towards me
But have you realized from my point of view?
Even in the sleep I am always on my toes,
Pleass have a good look at yourself,
Your playing with us lesser mortal,
Leading to nothing but an end,
An END where neither i nor you
Neither of us is going to wins.
Good one Namrata! 👍
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A sensitively written poem. Thanks for the follow and do continue your exploration of the arts
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Beautiful and that is a fact that it has shades of nothingness but even they r disturbing at times. Great penned lines.
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Thanks
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Welcome Namrata.
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Thought provoking expression of the helplessness of being a sensitive mind.
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Nicely described the feeling of nothingness from life. As we do something to achieve something as result or reward but finally gets really different what we had never thought or we can say future is uncertain.
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Nice poem. Very nice.
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Thanks
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